A Inch from Death

One day in the middle of the summer two friends Chewbaka and Frankie were planing on going out into the ocean but first they wanted to go camping.  The first day Frankie got up early so that he can get a fire started.  When he was almost done getting wood he broke a branch and he got stung and was not happy until he got back to the camp.  From that day on Frankie has hated animals and has been mean to them .   

Chewbaka is different because he don’t hert them he cares for them.  when they started there trip things got bad because Frankie started to kill fish for fun and then through them back.  Frankie fell over board and then Chewbaka saved him be for he drowned.  Then one night a storm came and they woke up in time to be thrown off the boat.  Chewbaka started to be lifted up onto a dolphin and started to leave but then Frankie said that if he got saved he will be nice  to all things and from that day on he kep his promise.  When they got to the shore Frankie be came a vetraian.  The moral of the story is to respect others and the WORLD.

Chattering of teeth  

in freezing morning  

by a burning hot fire 

I am a kind loving boy 
I wonder if i will pass school 
I hear kittens crying 
I see a dog boxing
I want a hucky 
I am a kind loving boy 

I pretend i'm lost in the wild 
I feel scared 
I touch plants 
I worry about my grampa 
I cry about my dad 
I am a kind loving boy 

I understand some animals feelings
I say i like animals
I dream some things
I try to pass school
I hope to go on a ski trip
I am a kind loving boy

A Boys Life

There was a boy that lived in a enormes abanded house.  One day the boy found a crystal shop by luck.  The doorway was dangerous , he wanted to go in but instead he just gazed in.  HE reached into his money pouch to see if his treasure was still there.  He had a desire to get a wool raven from Egypts' king.  He was right on schedule because he was at the village at nightfall, but the village was dirty and destroyed.  When he reached the pyramids, he was relaxed and so he pulled out a pipe and started to smoke it.

i think that The Alchemist is one of the best bookes i've read because the boy is experienceing his personel legan.  I think that the battle could have been at least a page long.   

summer

 this summer I went to my moms house in twenty-nine palms ca. it's burning hot the sound of the cars on the road the cool house the air smell's like burritos.