I like your Haiku because you have contrast between lines, "freezing morning" and "burning hot fire" I also like it because it brings back memories of your "great" time at the camping trip, especially falling in the river, I bet that was "fun".
I like your Haiku because you have contrast between lines, "freezing morning" and "burning hot fire" I also like it because it brings back memories of your "great" time at the camping trip, especially falling in the river, I bet that was "fun".
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